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With all my resources I try to find a balance between clarity and creativity, aiming to stretch and challenge as well as train. Most of all, I want to 'knock on the doors of the mind', introducing students to a wider range of texts, ideas, activities and experiences. Although English is my speciality, I've also got a keen interest in Biology and Geography, which occasionally manifests in resources. Let me know if there is a text not catered for anywhere and I'll see what I can do.

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With all my resources I try to find a balance between clarity and creativity, aiming to stretch and challenge as well as train. Most of all, I want to 'knock on the doors of the mind', introducing students to a wider range of texts, ideas, activities and experiences. Although English is my speciality, I've also got a keen interest in Biology and Geography, which occasionally manifests in resources. Let me know if there is a text not catered for anywhere and I'll see what I can do.
Word-hoard series 1: Put it right
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Word-hoard series 1: Put it right

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While a Thesaurus can be a useful tool, it is a blunt instrument when used without understanding of the subtle differences in meaning of synonyms. The PP explores how things can go wrong, using words that could easily become part of each student’s word-hoard. Differentiated for slow writers or to speed the whole class up, the worksheet supports the PP in this longer self-check starter, designed to develop apt vocabulary that takes context into account. This starter could easily be developed into a whole lesson by inviting students to create their own muddles which other groups mend, using the PP sentences as a model.
Vital verbs! Improving creative writing through choosing apt vocabulary.
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Vital verbs! Improving creative writing through choosing apt vocabulary.

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In this lesson, explore the power of choosing the right verb. The Power Point provides the lesson from start to finish and the word doc. provides a fill-in opening for weaker students, to get them started. The Lesson provides a definition, an 'odd-one-out' task, some quick physical activity [select someone to demonstrate if the class would be unsettled by a bit of movement], an extract from 'The Recruit' and some writing suggested by photographs. At the heart of it all is 'show don't tell' to move writing up a gear.
'The Ruined Maid' & 'At an Inn', by Thomas Hardy: A-Level poetry: Flipped Learning, Jigsaw- Groups
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'The Ruined Maid' & 'At an Inn', by Thomas Hardy: A-Level poetry: Flipped Learning, Jigsaw- Groups

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This cluster of resources is rooted in two approaches to teaching: A] Flipped Learning – the students first go and find out about their topic. Your task is to bring all the threads together for them in a plenary lesson AND B] ‘Jigsaw’ – where students find out a piece of the whole then share information to get the complete picture. Allow several lessons and a homework session for this task as it involves research and feedback. The PP presents a useful way of introducing the poems, still keeping to the independent approach and providing a lead in to the tasks. On the Word docs are AO cards with links to guide students' search for information. To finish off, give students an idea of your exam board’s requirements for the poetry question, give them a mark scheme and ask them to write a model answer to a typical question using all the information they’ve gathered in their own research and from their classmates. Print out the planning sheet [assessment] on A3 so that students can plan to cover all the AOs in a trial question for each poem.
Creative writing 4: implicit meaning to create atmosphere.
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Creative writing 4: implicit meaning to create atmosphere.

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Using short extracts from both modern and classic texts, as well as visual stimulus material, this lesson focuses on how implied meaning in the description of a setting helps to create an atmosphere. Thus it both helps improve writing generally, but also prepares students for the demands of the new AQA spec English Paper1, fiction reading and writing. Section A is about reading fiction and in section B students have ‘to demonstrate their narrative and descriptive skills in response to a written prompt, scenario or visual image’,
'Trial' AQA English Paper 1 Section B, Creative writing: 2
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'Trial' AQA English Paper 1 Section B, Creative writing: 2

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With no past papers, it is useful to have a 'trial' exam paper {based on the AQA specimen paper for the 2015 Spec to be examined in 2017} to use as revision. The tasks are different, but the style is similar, so KS3s could familiarise themselves with the type of task, or it can be used as revision with KS4 in the future. The PP runs a strategy for thinking about the tasks, with some questions and examples to stimulate ideas. The last slide offers a quick correction task; with an extra click, the answers will be revealed.
Creative writing 3: setting & atmosphere
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Creative writing 3: setting & atmosphere

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In this writing lesson, students exercise both their close reading of fiction - learning from published authors - and writing creatively ‘to demonstrate their narrative and descriptive skills in response to a written prompt, scenario or visual image’, which is the requirement for AQA's new English Paper 1 Section B creative writing question. Whether you're preparing KS3 students for what will be required at GCSE , or revising skills with KS4, these tasks focus on writing for effect and noticing how published writers have done so, which can only promote improvement.
SPaG starters- Improving vocabulary :  WoW words & appropriate connectives
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SPaG starters- Improving vocabulary : WoW words & appropriate connectives

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Both these starters aim to fine-tune vocabulary so that students actually say what they mean. The vocabulary match gets definitions right to expand their word-hoard, while the connectives exercise picks up on some common mis-usage and gets students to choose more appropriate connectives. In each case the first slide gives the task which is also on the handout and then the students can check their won work from the PP. A drip-feed of SPaG starters will keep students mindful of using language correctly while improving their knowledge of how the language works.
Comparing unseen poems: 'Futility' by Wilfred Owen & 'Suicide in the Trenches'  by Siegfried Sassoon
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Comparing unseen poems: 'Futility' by Wilfred Owen & 'Suicide in the Trenches' by Siegfried Sassoon

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The questions on the worksheet are valid prompts for any comparison of poems, but are particularly for the new EDUQAS style of Section C unseen poetry comparison. The first worksheet contains the poems and the questions, which are based of the specimen papers provided by the exam board. This makes an easy to set homework of cover lesson. The second worksheet has key points as possible answers. So the task can be self or peer assessed easily. For other exam boards or general poetry preparation, the 'answers' could be the springboard for an essay comparing the two poems, to help less able students cluster their response.
SPaG starters: Proof-reading- correct errors & punctuation
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SPaG starters: Proof-reading- correct errors & punctuation

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Keep students mindful of the need to proof-read with regular starters and short SPaG exercises. These self-mark starters consist of an instructions slide and an answer slide PP and the text to be corrected on a handout, either for the whole class to aid speed or as differentiation to aid weaker/slower students.
'Revolver' by Marcus Sedgwick: opening lesson, pre-reading
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'Revolver' by Marcus Sedgwick: opening lesson, pre-reading

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This short novel is riveting, so ideal for a boy-heavy class or those not too keep on reading. The lesson begins with a true or false starter dressed up as 'Would I Lie to You': depending on the group you could invite students to come up with their own facts, perhaps researched for homework and present them with more spin, or divide the group into two opposing teams. These facts are chosen for their general relevance to the story. The next phase is looking at the opening of the novel to notice how succinctly so much is said - a good exercise in inference. The PP takes students through the thinking process and the handout sheet enables them to annotate the text without re-writing the sentences. The lesson ends with a writing exercise in which they try to emulate Sedgwick's concentrated writing in 75 words. These extracts could also be used to supplement a unit on 'survival', or a focus on reading: 'how does the writer use language to...'
Improving writing: Sentence openers self-check starter
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Improving writing: Sentence openers self-check starter

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Using a variety of sentence openers is an effective and easy way to improve writing. The PP begins with a reminder of the ways in which sentences can be opened more effectively. The worksheet task - 2 to a page to cut costs - is to label the openers in a piece of writing, using the reminder slide if needed. Students check their own work from the next slide, writing in correct answers. This task is also useful preparation for any task that requires close reading. A final slide challenges students to complete the story in at least 4 more sentences, each with a different opening, a task which could be set as homework, a plenary or extension work.
'Trial' AQA English Paper 1 SectionB,  creative writing: 1
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'Trial' AQA English Paper 1 SectionB, creative writing: 1

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This 'trial' exam paper is based on the AQA specimen paper for the 2015 Spec to be examined in 2017. The tasks are different, but the style is similar, so this work sheet can be used as exercises with current KS3s to familiarise them with the type of task, or as revision with KS4 in the future. The PP starter gives them a strategy when faced with a similar exam paper and some extracts to inspire their writing. On the last slide an extra click of the mouse [when they've had time to try] reveals the answers.
'Revolver'  by Marcus Sedgwick: after reading Chapter 1.
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'Revolver' by Marcus Sedgwick: after reading Chapter 1.

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The PP contains the lesson, which focuses reading: by practising finding apt quotes; inferring and deducing; and writing about reading by analysing key words. Slide one presents a starter question which partners can discuss briefly. This gives students a POINT. Subsequent questioning leads them to EVIDENCE and EXPLORE/ANALYSE and there are slides with possible answers to allow for self- or peer assessment. The lesson ends with a SPaG plenary on the use of quotation marks. There is also a differentiated handout, one page giving a condensed lesson for weak or visually impaired students - could work with TA outside the classroom [give the TA a slide handout for reference]- and another for slow workers who need to be given a copy of the quote rather than write it out.
SPaG 'The Boy who Swam with Piranhas' advert Chapter 23
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SPaG 'The Boy who Swam with Piranhas' advert Chapter 23

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The thing for teachers to emphasise in preparing students for this task is that alliteration works by sound, not letter - so 'cough' and 'kill' have the same sound. The advert draws on specific descriptions in David Almond's novel and chapter and page numbers are given for the 2012 Walker Books edition. Some students like to get on and read the book in one go after the initial chapters, so let them do the more creative tasks when they've completed the story. Best pieces can be displayed - encourage students to be creative as well as to use slogans, alliteration, rule of three etc.
'Revolver' by Marcus Sedgwick: Chapter2 - personification
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'Revolver' by Marcus Sedgwick: Chapter2 - personification

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The PP contains the lesson, slide 1 being the starter which requires students to retrieve the action of the chapter. [Most of the chapter is thoughts and flashbacks, so picking out the action in the 'now' is not too onerous.] Students are then given a quote to analyse, step by step, through questioning. Possible answers are given along the way. Thus they recognise 'personification' and think about why its use here is effective. In this way they begin to add 'evaluation' to their analytical skills. The plenary, slide 8, takes them back to the piece of writing they did in the opening lesson - but could be set afresh as a stand-alone task; students try to write their own personification. Differentiation is via a handout: page 1 serves very weak or visually impaired students and can be done with a TA outside the classroom, while page 2 provides the quote which can be handed out to slow writers, those returning from music etc.
Measure for Measure: Revision - question formulation, essay tips and quotes
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Measure for Measure: Revision - question formulation, essay tips and quotes

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Typical AQA questions begin with a critical stance to be applied to an extract and then the play as a whole. The starter PP gives the critical stance and asks students to formulate the question [a paper version is available to cut time wastage ] and chose - in groups with discussion- a suitable extract for the question. The homework is a log to fill in for each Act, providing a key focus and some key quotes. A note on essay writing outlines a strategy to follow as well as giving feedback from AQA on the way they prefer essays written.
Creative writing tasks: 1 imagery
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Creative writing tasks: 1 imagery

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The new AQA English Spec. for teaching from 2015 includes a whole reading and writing paper [Paper 1 in the specimen material] given over to both reading and writing creative material. These exercises can be 'drip-fed' to KS3 and KS4 to help them hone the skills for this task. This set of tasks focuses on descriptive vocabulary and figures of speech. I've marked them A-C in order of how I use them, but they stand alone; the extract handout goes with PPT C. All photographs by Graham Hobbs.
SPaG 'The Boy who Swam with Piranhas' - Chap 5
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SPaG 'The Boy who Swam with Piranhas' - Chap 5

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Kids love playing teacher and in this exercise they get to 'mark' Clarence P. Clapp's spelling. The answers are on the second page and can be projected or handed to a group or table to check their marking. If you can, let pupils mark in red pen to add to the game. This work is aimed at weaker KS3 students, but should also suit KS2. 'The Boy who Swam with Piranhas' is written by David Almond, published by Walker Books and is illustrated, so ideal for reluctant readers. As an extra challenge, project a letter table containing a 9-letter word from the task. students should find the 9letter word as well as 4-or more letter words using the letters. Answers are on slide 2.
'Revolver' by Marcus Sedgwick: Chapters 5 & 6, structure, recall & imagery
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'Revolver' by Marcus Sedgwick: Chapters 5 & 6, structure, recall & imagery

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This is an exciting novel, especially for boys: short enough for reluctant readers to give it a chance and gripping enough for all readers to be engaged. The PP covering chapter 5 begins with a focus on the structure of the novel, introducing the term 'generating circumstance' and then structure at sentence level. Chapter 6 begins with a deceptively simple test: True or False to test recall and a] or b] to test understanding of imagery. The answers are on the Chapter 6 PP to enable peer assessment. For more able students there is an enrichment question on juxtaposition in imagery - expect a PEEL paragraph to the effect that contrasting God and the Devil, stroking and hammering emphasises how evil the man looks - and turns out to be .
Descriptive writing, Lesson 1: editing & crafting
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Descriptive writing, Lesson 1: editing & crafting

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Descriptive writing is soon to be a major part of the English exam [from 2015 for 2017 exam], so it is a good idea to start 'drip feeding' techniques for top grades to more able KS3s as well as KS4s still doing course-work or just aiming to write more effectively. Each of these lessons uses short reading extracts too, to help students recognise techniques they could use, thus providing some preparation for the fiction reading portion of Paper 1 [new AQA English spec]. The PP outlines the lesson plan and the handout gives students a copy of the text extracts looked at. Notes on the relevant slides prompt less experienced teachers to notice relevant techniques. Peer marking ends the session. Photographs are once again used by kind permission of Graham Hobbs.